Writing a Middle-grade Masterpiece
Ain't Easy!
Originally posted in The Purple Crayon – on "Musings"
by Margot
Finke
Libraries, bookstores, and online
shops offer middle-grade novels of all types: inspiring, good, bad, and that
iffy area in-between. I am sure every writer starts out with the intention of
writing a story that inspires as well as entertains young readers. However, it
soon dawns on them that hard work, imagination, and dedication are just small
parts of what it takes to write a middle-grade book that inspires and
entertains.
Like any other job or career, a
potential writer must spend time learning the craft of writing for children —
an apprenticeship, if you will. The rules are available for those who take the
time to learn them. And once you learn the rules, you can take an occasional
deep breath. . . and break them with impunity.
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Secret Ingredients
for a Middle-grade Masterpiece:
Trying to write for the older half
of the middle-grade range? To appeal to kids on the cusp of adolescence: with
raging hormones and today’s fast pace your main competition? From 10 to 13
years of age is the range I mean. However, kids find their own reading comfort
level, so some 10/11 year olds might read YA books, while older teens might
still be into middle-grades. It all depends on their maturity and individual
reading level.
Here’s a preview of the ingredients
you’ll need to dig out of your imagination, and your well-honed craft box, if
you plan to whip up a great middle-grade book for those fickle 10-13 year-olds:
- Tight writing.
- Active and powerful verbs.
- A plot that’s cool and fast paced.
- Characters who are alive with authenticity.
- Dialogue that is true to the characters.
- A background rich with possibilities or mystery.
- Your own unique writing voice.
- Hints and clues that are woven into the fabric of the
plot, and tell of past history and things yet to come.
- End of chapter HOOKS that keep readers turning the
page.
When completed, your middle-grade
masterpiece needs to be somewhere between 20,000 and 60,000 words. Yes, I know
Jo Rowlings upped the ante with her succession of Harry Potter books, and if
your plot and characters have the same appeal as Harry, you too might get away
with a larger word count. However, first-time authors might be wise to err on
the side of fewer words.
Ingredients
— How and Where to Find Them:
- If it’s been a long time since you sat in Mrs.
Learnit’s English class, take a basic English/Writing course. You can do
this online, through a nearby night class, or your local college. Writers
must have confidence in their basic grammar and punctuation skills.
- Haunt your local bookstores and library. Read every
middle-grade book you can get your hands on. Dissect the plots in these
books, and the way authors create their characters. Look at the sentence
structure, the way they describe events and places. Make notes. If a book
grabs your interest, find out what it is the author does that has that
effect on you. Is it their richly crafted characters, their sharp and fast
moving plot, or their attention to all those small yet vital details?
- Write as often as you can. Becoming a published author
is not for wimps or hobbyists. Sacrifices are mandatory. If it means
getting up before dawn, because that is the only time you have to write —
so be it. If it means being bleary-eyed at 2 am so you can finish a
chapter — suck it up! If it means living with dust bunnies that make your
mother-in-law cluck, and teaching your kids to do their own laundry and
room clean up — go for it! Most important is a partner who is sympathetic
toward your (weird to his mind) need to write, and his willingness to help
out around the house when you are suffering from one of your many writing
frenzies. Perfect wife, mother and housekeeper, OR great writer? Both
demand masses of time — your choice, mate.
- If you have no middle-grade children in your family, volunteer
at your local middle school. Observe these half-baked creatures in their
natural habitat. Body language, peer groups, misfits and lunch room
behavior: all this is grist for your writing mill. Moreover, you’ll
probably have fun doing it. Make a note of what these kids read for
pleasure.
- Network with others who write for the same age. This
means joining online lists where writing and publishing information flows
back and forth, and you can have your many beginner questions answered.
Join a critique group that has some advanced or published members. Their
support and encouragement will often save your sanity. Critiquing the work
of others is surprisingly informative, and you will benefit from the
feedback you receive on your own writing. Below are three of many great
online lists for children’s writers, and links to join.
Whenever possible, go to SCBWI
(Society of Children’s Book Writers and Illustrators) writing conferences.
SCBWI is well worth joining. They offer many advantages to newcomers, and
their branches pop up in every state. This is where you meet editors and
agents, and hear them speak about today’s world of writing and publishing.
Meeting them often leads to you being able to send your manuscript to a
specific editor: and with so many publishers today closed to submissions,
this is a real plus. Other writers will also be there, keen to network
with you, and share their writing experiences.
The MAGIC of learning MORE will see you through!
If you don’t have a college degree,
or even a high school diploma, don’t worry. Talent, perseverance, and a slice
of luck can make up for these so-called deficits. A dedicated and talented
writer, determined to learn the craft of writing, and stick with it until they
become published, will succeed. Boost your writing confidence with an advanced
writing class. This will take you beyond grammar and punctuation, and into the
meaty realm of plots, character enrichment, voice and pace. Perfect these
skills, and acceptances rates multiply like rabbits. Below are three links —
two links for great writing classes, and the other to terrific books on how to
write for children.
- Recommended Writing Class
- Anastasia Suen — A wonderful writer. If you want to write
for children, visit her Intensive
Other
Websites That Will Boost Your Writing Knowledge:
A must browse for beginners and experts alike. A veritable
treasure
trove of writing information.
- CBC (Children's
Book Council)
Information about writing, authors,
books and publishing.
- Writer's Market Research
publishers. They update information regularly. They have a program
where you can track submissions, but it cost to join. Writer's Market also
has a free update site. You don't have to subscribe to the magazine to get
the updates.
- Jan Field's Website
Chock full of writing help, and kidmagwriters.com is
a terrific resource for
those who want to write for magazines.
- CWIM (Children’s Writer’s & Illustrator’s Market).
This hard copy book is the information Bible for publishers,
editors, agents, and what they want from
YOU in the current year
- LINKEDIN is a place for serious writers. Lots of writing lists for every genre`.
Final
Note to Prospective Authors:
Keep writing. Keep learning. Keep
researching to find the right publisher. Keep sending out those finished manuscripts.
Editors do not make house calls!
HAPPY WRITING MATES!
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